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Things we liked (ignoring the bar scene):
- Everyone looking like zombies however they're just doing their boring jobs
- When a car would go past and it would cut into next shot
- The continuous panning from left to right
- The use of titles such as the Shaun of the Dead on the floor
- The narrative enigma of Shaun panning from feet to head and looks like a zombie
- The quick shots of parts of his morning routine
ZOMBIELAND
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Things we liked:
- The video recorder effect
- Point of view shot with the first zombie
- The visuals of Earth (don't know if we could do that)
- The use of titles for the rules
- The funny list of rules
- The slo mo title sequence (however we thought it was too long)
- The moving titles in the title sequence
WARM BODIES
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Things we liked:
- The narrative enigma of the main character then revealing he is a zombie
- The set design
- The internal monologue
- Flashbacks
- Scenes going on behind character
- The transition back to how it was before and then back to now
1 comment:
Think carefully about post titles – you might want to split off a SHORT sep post to BRIEFLY outline the idea/s, and make clear THIS is a 1st pitch. Again, some brief post contents description would be useful. As a 1st pitch (effectively 2nd after feedback) this is a solid start (B); you’ve been given a lot of feedback, including on narrative ideas and research avenues, make sure that’s FULLY reflected in the blog.
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