Its accurate, but - re-edit with less tiny text + use of semiotic terms, + sharper explanations. Add a 2-shot. You COULD also now add a 2nd, smaller pic for each - screenshot from any film. Never just plonk in a vid/doc without SOME explanation above of what it is/contains. Not for this one but more generally for vodcasts you'd add a clear bulleted summary of contents BELOW the video (same for Eval later on).
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Its accurate, but - re-edit with less tiny text + use of semiotic terms, + sharper explanations. Add a 2-shot.
You COULD also now add a 2nd, smaller pic for each - screenshot from any film.
Never just plonk in a vid/doc without SOME explanation above of what it is/contains. Not for this one but more generally for vodcasts you'd add a clear bulleted summary of contents BELOW the video (same for Eval later on).
done
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