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AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
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Their points:
- Didn't see too much difference
- Should have made face when sniff first top
- Second was snappier which she liked
- Likes the sugar
- Noticed background noise
What I think:
- He's correct, I didn't change too much about it. I removed one of the tops to sniff as it just took too much time. I also tried to make the kitchen shots snappier and with more rhythm, so I downloaded and imported a metronome and tried to edit to the pace of that.
- I agree with this point to a certain extent. I think that it would have helped to have that added expression but I think the clothes scattered on the floor covers the slob point enough.
- I'm glad she noticed the way that the editing was quicker and I'm glad she liked it.
- I'm also glad she found the sugar element funny.
- I noticed this background noise too so for my next sample scene I will find a way to remove that as much as possible.
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